After reading both wikis from Tori and Purina, I"m going to have to side with Purina with her grade of an A+. Compared to Tori's grade of an A. The A+ is a better grade because it was backed by more facts and reasons.; Tori used the reasons very similar to Purina, but Purina elaberated more on what the littlle happenings that happened during Washington's presidency. For example, both girls told us about the Whiskey Rebellion and the neutral alliance of America, however, Purina also went in depth about the forming of the capitol, further detailed information about Jay's Treaty, and the ratification of the Bill of Rights; the depth of her arguement strengthed her inital thesis that George Washington deserved an A+.
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